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Didn't notice :oops:
Anyway although it's a song and not a poem I thing it is great.

you grabbed my hand and we fell into it
like a daydream or a fever

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In a few moments lights will go down

Everything will be different, everything

I’m looking for you but you are nowhere to be found

You couldn’t bear it and flew away

However, the moment we will meet again approaches

I can feel it, can you?

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miou wrote:
Didn't notice :oops:
Anyway although it's a song and not a poem I thing it is great.

you grabbed my hand and we fell into it
like a daydream or a fever


yes it is. And especially that part.

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Couldn't agree more

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This is a very simple one. Wrote it in December 2005..

John? John..?

John
John the killer
Mysterious
is that he goes everywhere
I don't go

John is
sneaking in the streets' shadows
At nights
he does things
I daren't do

To stay alive
is to know
where he goes
what he does
or otherwise...

You are lost

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i hope he isn't real :shock:

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My First Poem by Me.

i cannot think of any verse,
to kick off my first poem.
there's no beginning,
middle, end.
i may as well stop here.

as i cannot think of any lines,
to write a decent poem,
there is no theme,
no dream, no ice-cream.
i may as well stop here.

as a title is no easy thing
in which to name a poem.
i'm uninspired, very tired.
i may as well stop here.

as i cannot think of any words,
to even write a poem,
if it rhymes,
then it's a crime.
i haven't even got the time
so i shall end it here.

Very Late Edit Underneath:

Meh.

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A really nice starting, minstrel! :)

I feel like killing someone tonight
I feel like making a fire, burning...

Spit innocent people and eat them
Medium...
No, (a chuckle) well-done.
Tastes like a fried chicken

The fingers and toes are like
Small candy bars
Let's eat them with sweet basil oil
Yummy... Ha ha ha.

I feel like killing someone... Tonight!


:roll: Too raw..? :lol:

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it depends on how you like your humans cooked :shock:

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Well-done of course! :lol:
Well but I guess mr. John the Killer is more into spitting and frying and everything... I'd rather have some chicken and kidney beans.

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Your happiness is riding over my misery
and I grow weaker day by day.
If your heart isn’t made by stone
please, end this nightmare and leave me alone.
You are like a ghost, hiding the light,
with you around nothing is right
Please, disappear, is it so hard?
and let me heal my broken heart


Dedicated to my bad luck

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Location: Off with his head, man, off with his head...
I can see clearly now that my vision is clouded
there is but one motion and that is forward
nothing can move in any different direction
"But the sea moves back and forth at all times", you might say
But you 've just failed to consider
backwards doesn't exist
It is just forwards from a different angle
In the same sense that you do not exist
You are just me in a different body
You could say the same for me
but then I'd think you're crazy.

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