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 Post Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 4:43 pm 
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The Circles Of Your Eyes

If i could, just for a moment, gaze into the darkness of your pupil,
The dark center of your sight
If you would let me close
If you would dilate
This black void, vast in depth, small in size
Could burn holes in my heart.

If I could, just for a second, gaze into the swirls of your iris,
And the hues of your brown
If you would keep your eyes open for me
And gaze back at mine
This circle around a circle in contrast with white
Could add colours to my life.

I'd promise never to gaze into anyone else's
Blue, green or black
I'd pledge to concentrate on you
And only your brown.
Things would be so much clearer
If I could see the circles of your eyes.

And If our eyes would meet
For the very first time
I would see dark shadows in yours
You would see blue rays in mine
Things are always clear and simple
When eyes meet eyes.

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Your hand was the light
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a few good poems. The Goat, I Dream of Verses & The Circles Of Your Eyes.

does anyone here write their own? i'm more a songwriter than a poet, although sometimes my lyrics tend to be poetic. shame i'm not prolific.

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singing minstrel wrote:
a few good poems. The Goat, I Dream of Verses & The Circles Of Your Eyes.

does anyone here write their own? i'm more a songwriter than a poet, although sometimes my lyrics tend to be poetic. shame i'm not prolific.


I do.
I think there's a thread for that around somewhere.
I havn't posted in it though

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fogchicken wrote:
singing minstrel wrote:
a few good poems. The Goat, I Dream of Verses & The Circles Of Your Eyes.

does anyone here write their own? i'm more a songwriter than a poet, although sometimes my lyrics tend to be poetic. shame i'm not prolific.


I do.
I think there's a thread for that around somewhere.
I havn't posted in it though


WE know :P

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I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You

~ Pablo Neruda ~

I do not love you except because I love you;
I go from loving to not loving you,
From waiting to not waiting for you
My heart moves from cold to fire.

I love you only because it's you the one I love;
I hate you deeply, and hating you
Bend to you, and the measure of my changing love for you
Is that I do not see you but love you blindly.

Maybe January light will consume
My heart with its cruel
Ray, stealing my key to true calm.

In this part of the story I am the one who
Dies, the only one, and I will die of love because I love you,
Because I love you, Love, in fire and blood.

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Can I try my own "poems" here? :lol:
Please don't upset, folks. But if this upsets you anyway, please remove this :lol:


Today I went crazy.
Listening to "Wowie Zowie" (weeheee!)
Driving in my bright red toy car I laughed
Dancing, giggling, dancing
with my funny melancholic doll
He's called Timmy Alice
He's got a polished top hat and silvery shoes
I had wonderful
little causes of hilarity
Watch out, Pythons!
But remember, I love you
Misters
Tonight at 8 pm and not only
then
But ev'ryday out of always
Let us dance again
Let us whirl like the snow
this morning
If we only happen to know where
we should make that la-la-laugh
Should we be tickled or not
Let us be the elephants we lay
our silly heads at nights
Hiccup!

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I write a bit myself but I don't believe that my poems are worthy of reading

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Well it's only a question of self-confidence. If I think my poems could probably be worth reading (in my dreams), then I guess yours could very possibly be worth reading. :D Don't cha worry, Miou!

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miou wrote:
I write a bit myself but I don't believe that my poems are worthy of reading


Having accidentally read some of those said poems, I can assure you they are very good.

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Thank you Loveling :oops:

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Location: Strawberry fields for ever
the car's on fire and there's no driver at the wheel
and the sewers are all muddied with a thousand lonely suicides
and a dark wind blows
the government is corrupt
and we're on so many drugs
with the radio on and the curtains drawn

we're trapped in the belly of this horrible machine
and the machine is bleeding to death

the sun has fallen down
and the billboards are all leering
and the flags are all dead at the top of their poles

it went like this:

the buildings tumbled in on themselves
mothers clutching babies picked through the rubble
and pulled out their hair

the skyline was beautiful on fire
all twisted metal stretching upwards
everything washed in a thin orange haze

I said: "kiss me, you're beautiful -
these are truly the last days"

you grabbed my hand and we fell into it
like a daydream or a fever

we woke up one morning and fell a little further down -
for sure it's the valley of death

I open up my wallet
and it's full of blood

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I think I already posted that one...

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